Title: ICAO 2.1 PDR Reference: 97110001 Originator Reference: ICAO 2.1 SARPs Document Reference: All SARPs parts Status: SUBMITTED PDR Revision Date: PDR Submission Date: 1/11/97 Submitting State/Organization: ATNP/CCB Submitting Author Name: Van Trees, SP Submitting Author E-mail Address: stephen.van.trees@faa.dot.gov Submitting Author Supplemental Contact Information: FAA/AIR-130 800 Independence Avenue, SW Washington, DC 20591-0004 USA +1.202.267.9567 +1.202.267.5340 (fax) SARPs Date: ICAO Version 2.1 SARPs Language: English Summary of Defect: The review of ICAO Version 2.1 SARPs shows up that some inconsistencies stil exist between IV 2.1 and IV1.1. Assigned SME: CCB Chair Proposed SARPs amendment: Part 2.1 (CM Application) 1/ 2.1.3.7.3.1 Italicize "Called" 2/ 2.1.3.7.4.1 Italicize "Calling" 3/ 2.1.3.7.5.3, Note 1: Change "paramter" to "parameter" 4/ 2.1.4.2.1 Bold "CMAircraftMessage" 5/ 2.1.5.3.2 Note 2, a) 2) Change "recieves" to "receives" 6/ 2.1.5.3.2.2.1.1 a) 1) Delete "ICAO" 7/ 2.1.5.3.2.3.1 b) 1) Change "CM-ASE Version" to "CM ASE Version" 8/ 2.1.5.3.2.6.1.1 Italicize "IDLE" 9/ 2.1.5.3.3.3.1.3 b) Delete "CM-ASE" 10/ 2.1.5.3.3.3.1.3 c) Delete "CM-ASE" 11/ 2.1.5.3.3.3.1.3 d) Delete "CM-ASE" 12/ 2.1.5.3.3.7.1 b) 2) Italicize "Calling Peer ID" 13/ 2.1.5.3.3.8.1 b) 4) Italicize "User Data" 14/ 2.1.5.4.2.1 d) 1) De-italicize "User Data" 15/ 2.1.5.4.2.1 e) De-italicize "Reason" 16/ 2.1.5.4.2.1 f) De-italicize "IDLE" 17/ 2.1.5.4.7.1 b) Change "." to "," 18/ Tables 2.1.5-2 and 2.1.5-3: Under the State columns (i.e. IDLE, LOGON, etc) change all states (e.g. ÞIDLE) to italics (e.g. ÞIDLE) 19/ 2.1.7 Note Change "messsages" to "messages" 20/ 2.1.7.1.1.6 Change "an ICAO" to "a" 21/ 2.1.7.2.1.2 Note 1, Note 2 and Note 3: De-italicize and capitalize first letters of class of communication service ( i.e. change it to Class of Communication Service) before the word parameter only (i.e. do not change "...particular class of communication,...") 22/ 2.1.7.2.1.2 Note 5: De-italicize Aircraft Address (only the one with the capitals; leave "...24-bit aircraft address" as is). 23/ 2.1.7.2.2.3 Italicize "Logon Request" 24/ 2.1.7.2.2.7 Change ".." to "." 25/ 2.1.7.2.6 De-italicize "Maintain Dialogue" Part 2.2 (ADS Application) Not yet provided. Part 2.3 (CPDLC Application) 1/ in 2.3.3.1.1, last sentence, "of" should read "or". 2/ Legende of Figure 2.3.3-1 should read "Figure 2.3.3-1." 3/ In 2.3.4.2.1, the elements of the ASN.1 type ForwardHeader should be lined up. 4/ In 2.3.4.2.1, the elements of the ASN.1 type StartDownMessage should be lined up. 5/ In 2.3.4.2.1, in the definition of the ASN.1 type ATCUplinkMsgElementId, in messages uM3, uM4 and uM5, "(N )" should read "(N)". Part 2.4 (FIS Application) 1/ in 2.4.1.1.2 a), "FIS Demand Contract" should be italicised. 2/ in 2.4.1.1.2 b), "FIS Update Contract" should be italicised. 3/ In 2.4.3.3.2.1, "ICAO Facility Designation" should be italicised. 4/ in 2.4.3.3.3.1, "Contract Number" should be italicised. 5/ in 2.4.3.4.2.1, "ICAO Facility Designation" should be italicised. 6/ in 2.4.5.3.5.4.1 b) 1), "Contract Number" should be italicised. 7/ in 2.4.5.3.6.3.1 a), "accept" should be italicised. 8/ page 546 is corrupted (check if this is a printing problem). Part 3.1 (ATSMHS) 1/ Section 3.1.1, Table 3.1.1-1: The frame of the table has been apparently lost and should be restored. 2/ Section 3.1.2.2.1.1.1, Table 3.1.2-1: The frame of the table has been apparently lost and should be restored. 3/ Section 3.1.2.2.2.2.2, item h: The terms "arrival-time " and "submission-time" should be de-italicized. (???) 4/ Section 3.1.2.2.3.2, Table 3.1.2-2: The frame of the table has been apparently lost and should be restored. 5/ Section 3.1.2.3.3.1.2, item a: The term "input" should be de-italicized. 6/ Section 3.1.2.3.4.2.1.3, Table 3.1.2.-4: The frame of the table has been apparently lost and should be restored. 7/ Section 3.1.2.3.4.2.2.3, Table 3.1.2.-5: The frame of the table has been apparently lost and should be restored. 8/ Section 3.1.2.3.4.2.3.2, Table 3.1.2.-6, Part 2, item 1.1: in the column "mapping/notes", replace "3.1.2.3.4, 3.12" with "3.1.2.3.4.3.12" 9/ Section 3.1.2.3.4.2.3.8, Note: replace "respectivly" with "respectively". 10/ Section 3.1.2.3.4.2.3.11: The term "elements" should be de-italicized. 11/ Section 3.1.2.3.4.2.3.14: The terms "MTS-identifier" and "trace-information-element" should be italicized. 12/ Section 3.1.2.3.4.2.3.14, item a) sub-item 2): replace "CCITT" with "ITU-T". 13/ Section 3.1.2.3.4.2.3.20: The term "content-return-not-requested" should be de-italicized. 14/ Section 3.1.2.3.4.3.2.2, Table 3.1.2.-7, row for AFTN Message Part "Text": The frame of this row has been apparently lost and should be restored. 15/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.2.1.2: Delete the space in excess within the term "original-encoded-information- types". 16/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.2.1.6, item d), sub-item 2), sub-sub-item i): The term "non-delivery-reason-code" should be italicized. 17/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.2.2.6.2, Note: Delete the spaces in excess within the terms "recipient- name" and "per-recipient- fields". 18/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.2.3.3: The terms "priority-indicator", "primary-recipient", "copy-recipient", "blind-copy-recipient", "responsibility" and "per-recipient-fields" should be italicized. 19/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.2.4.3: Delete the space in excess within the term "originator-requested-alternate- recipient". 20/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.2.4.5: The term "per-domain-bilateral-information" should be italicized. 21/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.4.1.2, item b), sub-item 2): Delete the space in excess within the term "per-recipients- fields". 22/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.4.3.2, Table 3.1.2-17: The frame of the table has been apparently lost starting from row 2.1.1 and should be restored. 23/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.4.3.2, Table 3.1.2-17, Part 1, item 2.2.2: Delete the space in excess within the term "originally-specified-recipient-numbe r". 24/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.5.1: Delete the space in excess within the term "current-encoded- information-types". 25/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.6.2.2, Table 3.1.2.-18: The frame of the table has been apparently lost and should be restored. 26/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.6.2.12: Delete the space in excess within the term "originating-MTA-report- request". 27/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.6.2.18: The term "recipient-name" should be italicized. 28/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.6.2.19: Delete the space in excess within the term "originally-specified-recipient- number". 29/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.6.2.22, item a): Delete the space in excess within the term "trace- information". 30/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.6.2.23: Delete the space in excess within the term "last- trace-information". 31/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.6.2.25: Delete the space in excess within the term "non- delivery-diagnostic-code". 32/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.6.2.32: Delete the space in excess within the term "internal- trace-information". 33/ Section 3.1.2.3.5.6.2.33: Delete the space in excess within the term "internal- trace-information". 34/ Section 3.1.3.3.2.2.1, Table 3.1.3-1 The frame of the table has been apparently lost and should be restored. Part 3.2 (AIDC Application) 1/ in 3.2.1.1.1, the text of the Recommendation should be italicised. 2/ in 3.2.3.3.5, the text in the list under Recommendation should be italicised. 3/ in 3.2.3.3.6, the text in the list under Recommendation should be italicised. 4/ in 3.2.3.6.7.1.3, delete blank row in Table 3.2.3-6. 5/ in 3.2.4.2.10, the text of the title should be unbold. 6/ in 3.2.5.3.1.10.2.1 a), "User Data" should be italicised. 7/ in 3.2.5.3.1.11.1.2, the text of the Recommendation should be italicised. 8/ in 3.2.5.4.4.2.2.1 b), "Result" should be italicised. 9/ in 3.2.5.4.4.2.2.1 b) 2), "Result Source" and "Provider Abort Reason" should be italicised. 10/ in 3.2.5.3.5, Note 1, insert a space between the words "the" and "ACPM". 11/ in 3.2.5.3.6.5.2.1 b), "AIDC Data" should be italicised. 12/ in 3.2.5.4.4.2, the text of the Recommendation should be italicised. 13/ in 3.2.6.1.5.2.1 a) 6), "Msg Number" should be italicised. 14/ in 3.2.6.1.6.2.1 f), "Msg Number" should be italicised. 15/ in 3.2.6.1.16.2.1 b), "User Data" should be italicised. 16/ in 3.2.6.1.19.2.1 e), "Msg Number" should be italicised. 17/ in 3.2.6.4.3, Note 2, c2, "Reference ID" should be italicised. 18/ in 3.2.6.4.3, Note 2, c3, "Reference ID" should be italicised. 19/ in 3.2.7.1, Replace the lines of dots preceding and following "-- AIDC-APDU" by lines of hyphens preceded by two leading hyphens followed by a space. 20/ in 3.2.7.1, Replace the lines of dots preceding and following "-- AIDC-apdu" by lines of hyphens preceded by two leading hyphens followed by a space. 21/ in 3.2.7.1, AIDC-nfy-apdu, renumber the third and fourth components to read: notify [2] Notify, msgnumber [3] MessageNumber 22/ in 3.2.7.1, Replace the lines of dots preceding and following "-- AIDC MESSAGE DEFINITIONS" by lines of hyphens preceded by two leading hyphens followed by a space. 23/ in 3.2.7.1, CoordinateStandby, add a coma after the last but one component (destination). 24/ in 3.2.7.1, CoordinateAccept, add a coma after the last but one component (frequency). 25/ in 3.2.7.1, Replace the lines of dots preceding and following "AIDC MESSAGE ELEMENTS" by lines of hyphens preceded by two leading hyphens followed by a space. 26/ in 3.2.7.1, Insert 2 leading hyphens and a space before "AIDC MESSAGE ELEMENTS". 27/ in 3.2.7.1, "ICAOFacilityDesignation" should be in bold fonts. 28/ in 3.2.7.1, TrackData, insert a coma after the last but one component (SpeedGround). 29/ in 3.2.7.1, Replace the lines of dots preceding and following "-- AIDC ERROR-RELATED TYPES" by lines of hyphens preceded by two leading hyphens followed by a space. 30/ "Primitive Sequencing" should be a level 4 heading (3.2.10.2). 31/ The sentence following "Primitive Sequencing" should be a level 5 heading (3.2.10.2.1). 32/ Table 3.2.10-1, needs to be re-typed as it is not legible. 33/ in 3.2.4.2.14, the text of the title should be unbold. Part 4 (ULCS) Typographical errors in "ICAO Version 2.1" SARPs produced by ICAO secretariat. Some of these could lead to mis-interpretation of the SARPs. See following list for details. Review problem: several different versions of "ICAO Version 2.1" have been seen. The hard copy version available at Redondo Beach (derived from a version was in RTF format, with a .doc extension) was not in a suitable state to review. It contained many formatting errors, which made it unreadable, and had diagrams missing. The soft copy available at WG3 Redondo Beach prints out differently depending upon whether WordPerfect version 7 or 8 is used. The WordPerfect 8 version would not print out as a complete document. The following comments apply to the version on the Redondo Beach server, printed page by page using WordPerfect 8. Proposed solution or assumptions made (if any): The following modifications are to be made to the ICAO Version 2.1 ULCS SARPs, in order to obtain an accurate version of the WG3 Phuket version of the SARPs. No CCB-approved PDRs have been applied. The defects in the following list are classified as follows: (F) - formatting error only (E) - minor editorial change or incorrect cross-reference (M) - major change which could cause misinterpretation of the SARPs ** - defects which were present in ICAO Version 1.0 and corrected in V1.1 Phuket output Defects introduced in ICAO Version 2.1 1. (F) There are spurious hard page breaks throughout the document (e.g. after Fig 4.1-1, after Fig 4.1-2) 2. (**F) Make bottom margin the same throughout the document. Bottom margin changes on pages 9, 13, 17. (Margins in Phuket output V1.1 were designed for printing / copying on either A4 or US letter paper). 3. (**F) Figure 4.1-1. Picture should be centred within frame. (Picture was re-drawn in V1.1) 4. (M) Figure 4.1-2. The box "FM (ATM) AE" should be "FIS (ATIS) AE". 5. (**F) Figure 4.1-3. Delete spurious horizontal arrows. 6. (**F) Figure 4.1-4. Delete spurious horizontal arrows. 7 (F) 4.2.3.2.1 Table 4.2-4: Remove horizontal lines, except for the line under the heading. (For consistency with Table 4.2-6 and Table 4.2-7). 8. (**E) Figure 4.2-6 Remove shading, reduce size of wavy line (exaggerated tilde) under Dialogue service. 9. (**M) 4.3.2.4.2 Indent Note 1 to align with bullet a) 3) text - the note applies only to that bullet point. 10. (**M) 4.3.2.4.2 Indent Note 2 to align with bullet b) text - the note applies only to that bullet point. 11. (**M) Table 4.3-6 The table is supposed to be partitioned into 6 parts, divided according to the "Source" in column 2. So: there should be SOLID horizontal lines above all rows which have an entry in column 2. There should be only a DOTTED horizontal line under the row with P-CONNECT rsp+ in column 1. 12. (**M) Table 4.3-7 The table is supposed to be partitioned into 6 parts, divided according to the "Target" in column 2. So: there should be SOLID horizontal lines above all rows which have an entry in column 2. Replace solid horizontal lines with dotted horizontal lines under all rows within the table, except for rows starting "ATN-App cnf", "ATN-App ASE rsp", "D-P-ABORT ind", "A-ABORT req", "P-P-ABORT ind" 13. (**F) 4.3.3.5.3.2.1, bullet c) Remove the italic font on the bullet number ("c)"). 14. (M) 4.3.3.5.5.2.1 The first "Result" should be in italics. 15. (F) 4.6.6.3.3.1 Number the following paragraph as 4.6.6.3.3.1.1 16. (M) 4.6.6.3.3.1 Table 4.6-16 Replace column 4 (Sender, ATN Support) entry "(Note 1)" with "(See Note)". In the note after the table, replace "Note 1" with "Note". 17. (F) 4.6.6.3.3.2 Number the following paragraph as 4.6.6.3.3.2.1 SME Recommendation to CCB: ACCEPTED and RESOLVED CCB Decision: RESOLVED